The maps show Pacific Railway Station station in 1998 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show Pacific Railway Station station in 1998 and now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the maps show the changes that happen to the Pacific railway station from 1998 to the present date.
Overall
, we can see that no of platforms, shops, and restaurants got increased when compared to 1998.
Firstly
, the number of platforms which was 4 in 1998 where increased to 7 by today. In between the new and old platforms, we can see a restaurant and next to it, there are two more shops. In 1998, the toilets were located beside the old platform but now as we can there disappeared. At the bottom of the new platform
that is
at the left corner, a new supermarket was built in the empty place. At the right corner, which is at the bottom of the old platform, the ticket office got a new entrance through expansion but the shop has been removed in the process of expansion. The cafe is roughly located in the same place.
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