International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants ant the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
As international
tourism
has brought enormous benefits to many places, on another side there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment but, this
have
more advantages Change the verb form
has
then
Replace the word
than
disadvantages
.
People
of
other countries are coming to see and Change preposition
from
expore
the different places. Correct your spelling
explore
Firstly
, tourism
will increase a
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apply
people
will get more employment and the nation
economy will increase. Change noun form
nation's
Secondly
, A person of
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from
a
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an
other country
will come and will exchange Change the wording
another country
other countries
it
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their
his
her
idea
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ideas
as well as
culture which will be helpful for nation
to develop and Add an article
the nation
a nation
a
high growth will be noticed. Other Remove the article
apply
nation
people
will come then
it will be helful
in maintaining good relation between 2 Correct your spelling
helpful
country
. Change to a plural noun
countries
For example
, If 5 person will come from the
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apply
paris
to Change the capitalization
Paris
the
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apply
india
Change the capitalization
India
then
they will eat, travel
, buy cloths
, and more which will help in earning profitCorrect your spelling
clothes
them
. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Citizen
of Fix the agreement mistake
Citizens
nation
can learn new things and create Add an article
a nation
the nation
relation
with each Fix the agreement mistake
relations
others
.
On another side, there are some Change to a singular noun
other
disadvantages
for
Change preposition
to
tourism
such
as local shopkeeper less get less profit compare
to malls and more. As Wrong verb form
compared
forign
will Correct your spelling
foreign
travel
more which will create air pollution, noice
pollution and more. If resource will use too much Correct your spelling
noise
then
it can create harm to environment
. Add an article
the environment
For example
, People
whose income is dependent on touristry and things like corona can affect it to
much. In place like a new Replace the word
too
zealand
3 months more Add a comma
,zealand
travel
is seen so 9 months less travel
is seen at that time they face unemployment serious
.
In conclusion, Change the adjective
seriously
Add an article
the traveler
a traveler
traveler
is good for the Change the spelling
traveller
nation
and there are some disadvantages
also
. From the above data, it can be said that tourism
plays great
role in Add an article
a great
country's
economy. It can Correct article usage
the country's
said
that the advantages of international Add a missing verb
be said
tourism
outweigh the disadvantages
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