THE BAR CHART BELOW GIVES INFORMATION ABOUT THE NUMBER OF STUDENTS STUDYING COMPUTER SCIENCE AT A UK university between 2010 and 2012. Summarise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

THE BAR CHART BELOW GIVES INFORMATION ABOUT THE NUMBER OF STUDENTS STUDYING COMPUTER SCIENCE AT A UK university between 2010 and 2012. Summarise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the number of admissions researching computer science in a UK university period from 2010 to 2012.
Overall
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, the number of males for British and international students was changing dramatically as compared to females. where insignificant fluctuations have been recorded over the period. In 2010, the rate of male UK learners was almost double the number of overseas attendants. But in 2011, these two figures are almost equal,
whereas
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almost 5 home enlistments grew as compared to the foreign in the year 2012, staying at about 43 and 39. At about the same time, a continuous rise has been seen clearly from the year 2010 to 2012. In the year 2010, about 32 thousand females joined the computer science course from their home country which was almost twice as the abroad undergraduate.
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, a big jump up has been noticed in 2011 for local learners peaking at 44 thousand, which remained balanced with only 1 additional student in 2012. On the opposite, from 2011 to 2012 foreign learners raised only 3 recruitment.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • breakdown
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stable
  • spike
  • drop
  • percentage change
  • overall
  • noteworthy
  • observations
  • main features
  • comparison
  • relevant
  • highlight
  • significant
  • summarize
  • gender analysis
  • male students
  • female students
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