PART 1: You read an article in a magazine about your hometown and some of the information was wrong. Write to the editor to correct the article and tell him how unhappy you are.
Dear Editor John,
I am
writting
Correct your spelling
writing
this
to bring to your attention about
how Change preposition
apply
dispointted
by the misinformation published by your magazine recently dated 22nd June about our town's population growth in the article titled "Know your town".
Correct your spelling
disappointed
Firstly
, on the information related to our town's population growth, you had
mentioned that it's decreased Unnecessary verb
apply
10
% in comparison with Change preposition
by 10
last
year. But as per the recent sensex
report released by the local government, Change the capitalization
Sensex
this
value stands at 18
% increase over Correct article usage
an 18
last
year. You can refer them verify
Fix the infinitive
to verify
this
by visiting www.muh.gov.me/reports/2023.pdf.
Furthermore
, the 3rd paragraph of the artice
Correct your spelling
article
mentioning
about lack of public Wrong verb form
mentions
beach
in our locality, Fix the agreement mistake
beaches
this
information is again factually wrong. Recently, public
beach had been provisioned and fully Correct article usage
a public
operationaly
for community use. You can visit them Correct your spelling
operational
operationally
in-person
to verify the amenities Correct your spelling
in person
its
Correct pronoun usage
they
offering
for the public.
I request you to issue corrections for your article in the coming magazine. And please improve your process of stating correct facts and figures. Since integrity is vital for Replace the word
offer
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the trustwortheness
trustwortheness
of any Correct your spelling
trustworthiness
journalisim
. And not to dissatisfy avid Correct your spelling
journalism
customer
like me in Fix the agreement mistake
customers
near
future.
Thank you for your attention and hope to see the correction issued at Correct article usage
the near
earlist
.
Yours faithfully,
Alan Turing
It's very important to get the facts straightCorrect your spelling
earliest
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.