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Many parents are concerned about the violent computer games or movies or leisure activities. How can this impact children ? What can be done to solve this problem?

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With the development of technology, a lot of
games
 and
films
 have appeared.
Although
 they are very entertaining, some of them are very violent, and they can harm heavily to
children
, so I think we have to treat
this
 problem as fast as we can. There are some effects of violent
games
 and
films
 I know. The first place is that they affect badly to
children
’s mentality.
In other words
, it affects to characters and makes them much more violent and fierce. The second place is that violent
games
 and
films
also
 have an effect on their social life,
children
 can be addicted to them if they play or watch those
games
 and movies too often,
moreover
, not only do not integrate into the community but
also
 become passive with situations. The final place is that some
children
 are unable to control themselves, and they can behave rudely or have conflicts with other people, and they can have serious injuries or hospitalisation. To solve that problem, I come up with some treatments. One of them is that we should educate
children
 about the harms and toxic things of playing or watching violent
games
 or movies.
In other words
, we increase the cognitive skills of
children
. Another additional solution is more outdoor activities.
Children
 do useful activities and avoid harmful things. From my perspective, violent
games
 and
films
 are very toxic and harmful, so
children
 must be in contact with them.

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