The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar chart illustrates information about the price of one
nations
exports Change noun form
nation's
several
items over 2 years. The table provides data Change preposition
of several
the
proportion Change preposition
on the
alter
in each item of exports in 2016 compared to 2015.
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altered
Overall
, it is clear that
petorleum
and engineered Correct your spelling
petroleum
goods
have the highest value, while
the
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apply
argiculture
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agriculture
agricultural
goods
and textiles
have the lowest value. Furthermore
, all types of given goods
showed increased expact
the gems and Correct your spelling
expect
jewllery
over the given period. Regarding the Correct your spelling
jewellery
table
the Add a comma
,table
textiles
showed highest
percentage Correct article usage
the highest
change
in the values, whereas
the argiculture
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agriculture
agricultural
goods
was
the lowest Change the verb form
were
change
.
Looking at the bar chart in more detail, the petorleum
Correct your spelling
petroleum
goods
was
the highest value compared to other products and in 2015 Change the verb form
were
was
around 60 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
billion
$ and the next year showed raise to 62 billion
$. In contrast
, the
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apply
textiles
was
the lowest in 2015 approximately 27 60 Change the verb form
were
billion
$ and in 2016 was 31 62 billion
$.
In terms of table
, the Add an article
the table
a table
higest
proportion Correct your spelling
highest
change
was in textiles
at 15.24 %. The second products
was gems and Fix the agreement mistake
product
jewllery
at 5.18%. In comparison , the lowest Correct your spelling
jewellery
change
was in petorleum
and agriculture Correct your spelling
petroleum
goods
at 3 and 0.81 percent
, respectively.Change the spelling
per cent
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