The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar chart illustrates information about the price of one
nations
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nation's
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exports
several
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of several
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items over 2 years. The table provides data
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proportion
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in each item of exports in 2016 compared to 2015.
Overall
,
it is clear that
petorleum
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petroleum
and engineered
goods
have the highest value,
while
the
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argiculture
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agriculture
agricultural
goods
and
textiles
have the lowest value.
Furthermore
, all types of given
goods
showed increased
expact
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expect
the gems and
jewllery
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jewellery
over the given period. Regarding the
table
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,table
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the
textiles
showed
highest
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the highest
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percentage
change
in the values,
whereas
the
argiculture
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agriculture
agricultural
goods
was
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were
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the lowest
change
. Looking at the bar chart in more detail, the
petorleum
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petroleum
goods
was
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were
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the highest value compared to other products and in 2015
was
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were
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around 60
billion
$ and the next year showed raise to 62
billion
$.
In contrast
,
the
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textiles
was
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were
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the lowest in 2015 approximately 27 60
billion
$ and in 2016 was 31 62
billion
$. In terms of
table
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the table
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, the
higest
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highest
proportion
change
was in
textiles
at 15.24 %. The second
products
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product
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was gems and
jewllery
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jewellery
at 5.18%. In comparison , the lowest
change
was in
petorleum
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petroleum
and agriculture
goods
at 3 and 0.81
percent
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per cent
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, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, textiles, change, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • categories
  • value
  • percentage change
  • compare
  • trends
  • changes
  • chart
  • table
  • overview
  • introduce
  • highlight
  • describe
  • summarize
  • information
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