The bar chart shows the number of overseas students enrolled in a third year Computer Science course at a Canadian college. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the quantity of international male and female enrollments from Singapore, Malaysia, China, Sri Lanka and
France
who are studying one of the 2 types of computer science in Canadian college
. Some of them enrolled in the Networking Fix the agreement mistake
colleges
core
option and others in the Database
core
option.
Overall
, we can notice that In most countries men tend to choose Database
core
courses, whereas
women mostly choose Networking core
courses and women students number is higher
The highest male
student's number is in Sri Lanka and China (8 000) and most of them participate in the Correct quantifier usage
number of male
Database
core
course. Other countries like France
, Malaysia and Singapore have lower than 5 000 enrolments.
The highest number of female students is in China(9 000)and Malaysia with Singapore(7000). Additionally
, the female student's amount is higher than males in those countries. In contrast
to this
, Sri Lanka and France
have the lowest women
enrollment's amount studying in Correct quantifier usage
number of women
this
college with lower than 4000 people. France
is the only country who had all female students enrolled on the Database
Core
option in the collegeSubmitted by telagisova.07 on
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