You and some friends ate a meal at restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. I n your letter •Give details of your visit to the restaurant •Explain the reason for the celebration •Say what was good about the food and the services

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Dear Manager,

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is Juwel Patil, your recent client for a party we had at your ABC restaurant at Meadowale, Toronto. It was my wedding reception and I had guests from my family, relatives and colleagues, close to 200+ in count. We booked the terrace hall to accommodate

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large crowd. The event started sharp at 7PM, by your Floor Manager with great warm welcoming arrangement at the entrances. That was a big "wow" from everyone. The wonderful arrangement of chairs and well-decorated staging area made my just-married bride, Akanksha immensely happy. The Food raised the bar to another height when we saw the six types of food varieties from Indian to Italian, Thai, and Chinese. The variety of Vegan and Non Vegetarian flavours, and styles offered was an "exceptional arrangement". The quality and freshness in the vegetables and in the meat

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very delicious, admired by Adults and Kids too! Cleanliness maintained surpassed our expectations too, with the waiters and cooks maintaining the masks, napkins and towels at every table for disposal. Thank you for bringing in the creative artist of your event management team of yours, Mr Manager. I am very much thankful to you for

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amazing experience for the special occasion of my Life. Yours sincerely, Juwel Patil

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

212 words

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