The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee.

The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee.
The process illustrates the main stages which take place in the
life
cycle
of a
honey
bee
. In general, there are four main stages in the development of the
honey
bee
from egg to mature adult insect and the complete
life
cycle
lasts for about 34-36
days
.
Firstly
, the
life
cycle
of the
honey
bee
begins when the female adult lays 1 or 2 eggs every three
days
. After 9 and 10
days
, each egg hatches and the nymph appear. During the third stage of the
life
cycle
, the nymph grows in size and sheds its skin three times before growing up.
This
moulting first takes place 5
days
after the egg hatches,
then
7
days
later, and again another 9
days
later. After a total of 30 to 31
days
from the start of the
cycle
, the young adult
honey
bee
emerges from its final moulting stage.
Finally
, between 34 and 36
days
from the beginning, it reaches full maturity. And
then
, the
honey
bee
’s
life
cycle
starts again when the female
bee
lays eggs.
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