You have been invited to talk about your country at the international meet at an American college. Write a letter to the secretary of the International community. You should write : 1. Accept the invitation and find a suitable date. 2. Discuss what you should talk about 3. Ask if you require any instrument.

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Dear Mr Jonathan,

This

is Juwel Patil, from Newyork university. I received your invitation dated 01st July, regarding the upcoming prestigious

event

at California American College. I am feeling honoured by your consideration. I will be available on July 25th, by 11AM. My agenda for the

event

is to deliver a 2-hour speech about my country -

India

. I would like to have a walkthrough of Modern and Ancient

India

This

will cover our culture, traditions and socio-economic life as an Indian.

Secondly

, I will narrate how

India

evolved post-British rule as a strong economy enabled by scientific and technology-enabled nations on a global footprint.

This

is going to be an interesting topic as I am going to relate how America and

India

are the two largest democracies on

this

planet, and interestingly ow these two nations carry the exact principles despite being separated thousands of miles away. I will seek help for my speech in terms of a Projector for my laptop

along with

a laser pen. I will

also

need a collar mic that I can plug in for better audio clarity. Your kind help will have the

event

scheduled and the above-said facilities for the

event

. Yours sincerely, Juwel Patil

Submitted by t.akanksha.mba on Sun Jul 09 2023

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