You have been invited to talk about your country at the international meet at an American college. Write a letter to the secretary of the International community. You should write : 1. Accept the invitation and find a suitable date. 2. Discuss what you should talk about 3. Ask if you require any instrument.

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Dear Mr Jonathan,

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is Juwel Patil, from Newyork university. I received your invitation dated 01st July, regarding the upcoming prestigious

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at California American College. I am feeling honoured by your consideration. I will be available on July 25th, by 11AM. My agenda for the

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is to deliver a 2-hour speech about my country -

India

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. I would like to have a walkthrough of Modern and Ancient

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will cover our culture, traditions and socio-economic life as an Indian.

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, I will narrate how

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evolved post-British rule as a strong economy enabled by scientific and technology-enabled nations on a global footprint.

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is going to be an interesting topic as I am going to relate how America and

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are the two largest democracies on

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planet, and interestingly ow these two nations carry the exact principles despite being separated thousands of miles away. I will seek help for my speech in terms of a Projector for my laptop

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a laser pen. I will

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need a collar mic that I can plug in for better audio clarity. Your kind help will have the

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scheduled and the above-said facilities for the

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. Yours sincerely, Juwel Patil

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