People should follow the customs and traditions when they start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that one ought to keep his traditional usage and principles when he moved to a new nation to inhabit.

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essay totally disagrees with the statement. Each country has its own tradition and life principles and local legislation that must be respected by other people. Traditionally every nation has its regional and moral beliefs which are an integral part of that country and they must be followed by newcomers.

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, in India cow is considered a holly animal because of religious reasons and it must not be eaten. Not

following

this

tradition may bring bad consequences.

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, some usages and traditions of one country may be illegal in another one. Not respecting

such

legal rules may

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legal problems for a person. As

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, in most

nations

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dog is considered a domestic animal and is adored as a member of the family. At the same time,

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dog meat is consumed by the population of some Asiatic nations. When these people come to a county where

such

kind of usage is illegal they must absolutely follow the rule. In conclusion, I disagree with the belief that people have to follow their customs and traditions in a new nation because it may cause religious and legal problems.

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People should follow the customs and traditions when they start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Your opinion

More and more people are shifting to a plant-based diet. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Environmental problems are too big for individual countries or individual people to address. In other words,we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Traffic congestion is a growing problem in many of the world's major cities. Explain some possible reasons of this problem and suggest some solutions.

The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum

Charities and organizations always give special names to particular days such as 'National Children's Day' and 'National Non-smoking Day'. What are the causes of these particular days? How effective are they?