People should follow the customs and traditions when they start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that one ought to keep his traditional usage and principles when he moved to a new nation to inhabit.
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essay totally disagrees with the statement. Each country has its own tradition and life principles and local legislation that must be respected by other people. Traditionally every nation has its regional and moral beliefs which are an integral part of that country and they must be followed by newcomers.
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, in India cow is considered a holly animal because of religious reasons and it must not be eaten. Not
following
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tradition may bring bad consequences.
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, some usages and traditions of one country may be illegal in another one. Not respecting
such
legal rules may
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legal problems for a person. As
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, in most
nations
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dog is considered a domestic animal and is adored as a member of the family. At the same time,
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dog meat is consumed by the population of some Asiatic nations. When these people come to a county where
such
kind of usage is illegal they must absolutely follow the rule. In conclusion, I disagree with the belief that people have to follow their customs and traditions in a new nation because it may cause religious and legal problems.
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