The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given diagram illustrates the various stages in a hydroelectric
power
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station for generating electronic.
Overall
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, it can be seen that a total of stages are involved in the whole procedure, starting with reserving river
water
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behind Dam, followed by the flow of
water
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to the
power
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station and
finally
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, producing electricity and transmitting them to National Grid. To being with, there is a dam in the path of the river which leads to the high-level
reservoir
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and its intake flows to generate electricity during the day.
Whereas
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,
this
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exit is closed at night. Afterwards, in the daytime,
water
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is transmitted to reversible turbines and it is turned to an operator for the generator. (Meanwhile,
water
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goes to the low-level
reservoir
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.)
Finally
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, the
power
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which is produced by the generator provides national electricity with
power
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lines.
By contrast
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, at night,
water
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which comes from the low-level
reservoir
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drives the turbines and
then
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, is pumped to the high-level
reservoir
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to reuse.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words power, water, reservoir with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • hydroelectric power station
  • reservoir
  • potential energy
  • mechanical energy
  • electrical energy
  • turbine
  • generator
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • power lines
  • gate-controlled tunnels
  • gravity-driven
  • transformation
  • clean energy source
  • sustainable
  • recycled water
  • mountainous area
  • activate
  • transmit
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