Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

The relationship between developing and developed countries is an extremely significant topic to discuss. What is the best way to help your neighbour and is it a story about money? Let's try to find out during

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essay. Some people assert, that rich regions should make

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financial assistance to others, and from the first

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is the best choice. The easiest way to give a hand is to give funds.

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it creates more addiction than useful help, the economy of the poorer areas is getting used to getting finance from outside in place of creating gain by itself. Which leads to an even worse economic situation inside the country.

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some people are convinced that their country should not support anyone at all.

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view comes only from selfishness and nothing else. We need to understand, that all populations have an influence on each other and we need to work together to produce a better future. If you asked me, I will presume that not everyone could take

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advantage

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funds.

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, there are plenty of stories about

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man winning the lottery, so how many of them

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success? Giving money to poorer countries is like giving a hungry man a fish

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of teaching him how to catch a fish. Indeed, it will assist, but only

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period of time. The greater help will be providing education, and sharing technological progress and know-how inventions. These measures could create a better society, which would lead to the renovation of the government environment, and particularly, the economic system.