Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like.
Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

Opinions are divided as to whether

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students

to

study

based on their preferences. Despite the fact that there are some benefits of enrolling in beneficial

subjects

, I believe that selecting degrees freely is usually more productive. On the one hand, there are several reasons why it is better to learn as per

students

’ discretions. First of all, each student has a distinguishable talent which means that not all

students

will be capable to

study

the exact same courses.

While

some are good at arithmetic, others excel in art or music. In doing so,

students

will have passion and enthusiasm for studying as they are interested in the teaching

subjects

resulting in better performance of

study

.

For example

, one of my friends, her parents forced her to

study

in

engineering

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field despite the fact that she was extremely passionate

in

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arts

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as they thought that there are various of demanding

in

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for

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engineering jobs in the market.

As a result

, she failed all exams and ,

however

, when she went back to

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in arts, she got excellent grades.

On the other hand

, it seems understandable for people who believe that

students

should concentrate on the

subjects

which will benefit them in their futures.

This

is probably because the labour market in

this

day and age is very competitive;

therefore

,

students

who graduated in majors which are demanding in the market will have greater opportunities to be employed and earn higher income

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in a better standard of living.

Secondly

, various companies have a very high

expectation

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on

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of

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their employees’ performance, By doing

this

,

students

will be able to utilize and adapt their knowledge based on their studies to work easily. In conclusion, It is undeniable that

study

in vocational is beneficial, but it seems to be that it is vital for

students

to have the right for choosing their own

subjects

.