The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The maps give information about the current and after the development of the university sports centre.
Overall
, the
two
most significant changes on the
map
are the leisure
pool
and Cafe. Looking first at the present graph, reception is located in the south and there are
two
entrances on the
right
and left
side
of the reception which are Called the Seating and changing room respectively. The changing room has a door to a 25m
pool
which is in the centre.
Moreover
, the gym is on the north
side
of the
map
and
also
two
outdoor activities are situated on the
right
and left sides of the
map
. Going forward to the future plan, reception, 25 m
pool
and seating will be located in the same place like the past.
Furthermore
, the cafe a sports shop will be created on the
right
and left
side
of the entrance. A new changing room will be built on the left
side
of the
map
and has a way to a leisure
pool
which will be made.
In addition
, the gym will be resized and it will be sited in the same area as before. The
two
outdoor courts will be omitted and the
right
one will be replaced by a sports hall. On the east
side
of the
map
,
two
dance studios will be established.
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