You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said they liked the hotel,but they did not enjoy the food. Write a letter to the manager to explain what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy with the food suggest improvements the manager can make to prevent this from happening again

Dear Manager, I am writing to complain about the dinner that was arranged at your
hotel
last
Monday. Our company had a meeting for the whole day and we utilised the conference room in your
hotel
, where lunch and dinner were served. I will explain why my colleagues did not enjoy the food and what improvements you can make so that
this
does not repeat. Employees in our company were happy with the professionalism of staff members at your
hotel
because they were able to arrange an extra table, as the tables were only able to fit four people
instead
of five.
Furthermore
, the design of your
hotel
is very unique which was appreciated by my co-workers. Having said
this
, the food was below expectations because the bread was stale and it was hard as a rock.
Moreover
, the vegetables tasted very bitter
as a result
some of our employees had to get take away from a local supermarket. To prevent
this
from happening in the future, I would advise you to make a contract with local farmers and bakers as they will be able to provide fresh produce and enhance the flavours of your dishes. I hope you are able to implement some of the suggestions I have made so that
this
does not happen to other customers. Yours faithfully, Ibrahim Mohammad Zaman
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