In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this?
It is certainly true that today
businesses
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business
companies
in their advertising usually emphasize that their products
are new in some methods. There are several reasons for this
trend
including, the companies
want
to increase their sales, Wrong verb form
wanting
tell
their expect Correct word choice
and tell
customers
about a
new features, Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
however
, I believe this
trend
is detrimental development on both customers
as well as
environment
.
On the one hand, there are Add an article
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various reasons why the commercial Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
companies
in their advertisements emphasise that their products
are new. The primary reason for this
trend
the
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is the
businesses
desire to make profits via promote their Change noun form
business's
businesses'
goods
. For example
, some businesses
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products
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soft
drinks. To keep their expect Correct word choice
and soft
customers
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the
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companies
utilize the
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products
as new. To illustrate, businesses
want to tell their expect customers
about a new features
of their Correct the article-noun agreement
new features
a new feature
a new
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new goods
a new good
goods
in order to make customers
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customers'
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For instance
, Ford companies
launch a new self-driving cars
, which Correct the article-noun agreement
a new self-driving car
new self-driving cars
this
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make
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making
customers
live more comfortable
.
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comfortably
On the other hand
, In my perspective, this
trend
can bring many harmful to the customers
as well as
ecosystem
. Regarding Correct article usage
the ecosystem
customers
, lauch
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launch
a new
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a new product
new products
products
every while
can encourage people to purchase items they realy
do not need. Correct your spelling
really
Therefore
, this
trend
can upset the budget of people and make them under the pressure of commercial companies
. In terms of environment
, if the Correct article usage
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businesses
in their ads motivate people to buy a new
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new goods
a new good
goods
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can leads
to damage Change the verb form
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to the
environment
. This
is due to
the fact that,
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apply
the
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goods
produce result
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the result
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of
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from
deforetation
, and Correct your spelling
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then
this
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because trees Remove the comma
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play
significant
role to absorb the greenhouse from the earth.
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To Sum up
, In my opinion, the main reaons
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reasons
reason
the
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apply
businesses
companies
in their advertising usually emphasize that their products
are new in some methods in order to make profits, tell
their Correct word choice
and tell
customers
about a
new features, Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
however
, this
trend
can leads
to adverse consequences on Change the verb form
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customers
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environment
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