The graph belew shows the numper of shops that closed and the number of new shops that people in one country btween 2011 and 2018
The given illustration presents information about the proportion of shop
closures
and openings from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the number of closures
shops
reached the
lowest point in 2015. Change the word
its
In contrast
, the amounts of opening shops
reached the highest in 2011.
First of all, the proportions of closures
fluctuated in the next four years, while
in 2015 it increased dramatically almost by 5500. After that, it grew steely in 2016. Eventually, the amounts of closures
remained unchanged in the last
three years,
As far as the opening shops
are concerned, the percentage of opening started from 8500 stores in 2011 then
it significantly decreased to 4000 shops
in 2012, After that it recovered between 2012 and 2014, next the number of openings slightly declined from 2014 to 2015. Moreover
, the percentage of openings remained unchanged in the next three years. Finally
, it fell slowly in 2018.Submitted by sammsh4321 on
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