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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is quite common these days to play
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 in many countries to relax, fun.
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 be some drawbacks.
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 trend. On the one hand, there are several reasons why people who play
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 are beneficial. A common reason is that
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 can make them fun and not stressed after their work.
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 a study by the American University that play
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 can make children who autism better at their favourites. Another cause that
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 creativity or education.
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, there are a number of disadvantages of playing
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 that people should take into consideration. One obvious drawback is that many people especially children who play
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 exceed, the above can lead to effects on their brain or risk psychological problems. In conclusion,
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 could bring about certain benefits, but their negative consequences should not be overlooked. My view is that we can play
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 to relax but not focus too much on the game because it will effects to do health or activity. Playing
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 can result in more disadvantages than benefits.
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