You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight Explain how missing your flight impacted you Clearly state what you would like the airline to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir, I’m writing because I skipped my international flight to New Zealand a few hours ago.

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, it wasn’t my fault, the airport had a technical issue with baggage checking and I got stuck in a huge queue for an hour and a half. I have only a little backpack, but everyone there was in a hurry and didn’t want to skip another person ahead. When I

finally

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came to my gate, the plane had already flown away.

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, I missed my son’s high school graduation. It was a huge event for me and my whole family. My wife and I are divorced, so

this

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situation didn’t make our relationships easier

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. I think, my son will not speak to me for a week or more. I would like you to compensate my expenses for the flight, meal and other costs including moral damage. I hope you will take my place. Best wishes, John Smith

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

158 words

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