Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects, while other believe that this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
According to
me, in secondary school a students
should study international news
as one of their subjects. Studying abroad news
has both sides good as well as
bad. It is nice if a student like news
a school should not focus them to study.
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