Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects, while other believe that this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

According to
me, in secondary school a
students
should study international
news
as one of their subjects. Studying abroad
news
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as well as
bad. It is nice if a student like
news
a school should not focus them to study.
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countries
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better but it should not be
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to do
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that.
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of
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india
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will be
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information
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about
what is happening in another country
then
they can be aware
about
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problem
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seen in other
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. If
students
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then
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can get benefits.
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it
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for the kids. It is good to be up to date.
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disadvantages.
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, of having information about nations
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children
should beware about own
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. If
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will not take action after
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data about the
news
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students
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international
news
subject but it should not be difficult for them to study. my own
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it is better to have knowledge about another
nation
.
Students
should be free for learning about
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way international
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  • Cultural diversity
  • Communication skills
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