Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It would indeed be a hard task to isolate a country which is unaffected by the phenomenon of demand for

oil

and

gas

.

People

would not find it shocking ,if,

this

trend were to heighten in the coming years ,considering the current trajectory of the modern world .Increasingly laid out for all to see and fast becoming a fixture of many discussions is an issue from all that pertains to the effects of

oil

and

gas

in remote and untouched areas .

This

essay shall analyse the issue from all sides and argue that

oil

and

gas

have more benefits ,whichever we look at.

Firstly

, I completely agree

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that the demand

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for

oil

and

gas

is rising which is an indispensable material in

humans life

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.

People

improve their living standards

such

as developing countries, the running of cars and planes, and the production of goods as

consequence

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of higher living standards we need to keep finding new resources since we will eventually run out. Take Britain

people

for example

, where a poll published on the

BBC’S

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website stated that the overwhelming majority of present-day politicians had decided to find new sources from other untouched areas.

On the other hand

, finding new sources of

oil

and

gas

would cause many environmental problems in forests

as a result

, of water pollution, air pollution and wood pollution.

Subsequently

, plenty of animals lose their homes until eventually their death. In Germany in 2007 over a two-year period, which polled over ninety thousand

people

, showed that opinions varied considerably. A Vast majority supported the above-mentioned viewpoint and considered it as paramount.

To conclude

, finding new resources of

oil

and

gas

that we can sustain and improve our living standards .The negative impacts

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outweigh

this

will damage the environment

as well as

human health and the planet.