Your company has sent you on a three-month course in another country. The course is coming to an end but you would like to prolong your stay. Write a letter to your manager, in your letter: Describe how the course has benefited you Explain why you would like to delay your return Suggest a date when you would like to come back

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Dear Sir, I hope
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you well and in high spirits. I am writing
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letter to inform you about the course, SAP - FICO which the company had enrolled me in Africa is now coming to an end. I would like to remain in Africa for
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of weeks more.
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with, the course has drastically improved my accounting skills from basic to advanced. I have clearly understood the inventory and sales recording process
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maintaining
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sheet .
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to that, I have passed the eligibility criteria for the global certification training. I would like to remain in
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country for 3 weeks more to obtain
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certificate in
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specific course. I believe
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certification will be an added feather in my achievement which is beneficial for me and for the organizational growth on the whole. I hope you will give me a chance to avail
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opportunity to the fullest by extending my stay in Africa for 3 weeks more. Looking forward
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a positive response from you. Your’s
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, Raj
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