The two given pie charts illustrate the statistics of a study about the preference of boys and girls for leisure activities.
The two given pie charts illustrate the statistics of a study about the preference of boys and
girls
for leisure activities
.
Overall
, it is clear that
the only similar figure was listening to music for boys and girls
. In addition
, boys preferred to play outdoor activities
whereas
girls
chose to play indoor activities
instead
.
Turning to boy’s leisure activities
, the percentage of playing computer games was the highest at 34%, slightly higher than the figure for playing basketball with
26% which left the proportion of reading far behind, at just 2%. Listening to music, skateboarding and soccer were less popular with 10%, 17% and 11% respectively.
Moving to the girl’s graph, the percentage of dancing and reading took the leading position Change preposition
at
with
27%, followed by the preference Change preposition
at
of
reading Change preposition
for
with
21%. Interestingly, the number of computer games and netball was similar with 16% for the former and 15% for the latter. Change preposition
at
Similarly
, girls
allocated time for doing gymnastics and listening to music at around 10%.Submitted by joyce.ta213 on
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