The pie chart compares the average household spending in two different countries in terms of five important categories in 2010.
The pie chart compares the average household spending in two different countries in terms of five important categories in 2010.
Overall
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householders in both countries spent a large proportion of their Linking Words
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on housing, food and other goods and services, Correct your spelling
income
while
healthcare was the service with the lowest spending rate.
In Malaysia, housing accounted for a third approximation, which was the biggest expenditure of household expenditures, Linking Words
while
Japanese families allocated just 21% of their budget for that. Householders in Japan paid the highest proportion of other goods and services, representing 29% which was slightly more than Linking Words
Malaysia
. In terms of food, the figures for both countries were similar, at 24% for the former and 27% for the latter.
Expenditure Change preposition
in Malaysia
of
healthcare was the lowest category. In Japan, Change preposition
on
this
represents 6% of the total, Linking Words
while
households spent 20% on transport.These figures were exactly double that in MalaysiaLinking Words
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