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The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village lberaries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village lberaries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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This
 provided line graph illustrates the number of
books
 loaned out from rural libraries over a period of four months, in 2014, and the pie chart explains the proportions of
books
 borrowed in terms of genre.
Overall
 it can be seen that the borrowing of
books
 from the four libraries was quite varied, and the
books
 of fiction were the most popular ones borrowed.
Firstly
, borrowed
books
 from Ryeslip and Sutton Wood were quite high at the beginning compared to the others, at 300 and 250
books
 per month in June, respectively for each one.
However
, the borrowing process fell steadily at Ryeslip to stop, at about 175
books
 in September, but Sutton Wood followed an erratic pattern, which was, at nearly 275 in July,
then
; it dropped suddenly to 100
books
 in August, and it dramatically rose again to 300
at the end
 of the period. But West Easton and Church Mount had a similar pattern for borrowing
books
 because the starting point was identical, at 50 in June, and
then
 both of them clumped to stand, at 150
books
 in September.
In addition
 to that, fiction
books
 represented the highest ratio of borrowing, at 43% in comparison to the others. But biography
books
 were the next popular which borrowed, at around one-fifth.
Although
 the percentage of borrowing science and history was the same , 14%, self-help was the least popular one, at 10%.
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