these days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. what are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

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Nowadays, a reduction in
teachers
has been noticed in many countries. Universities are receiving fewer
students
who want to become
teachers
, especially in high schools due for many
reasons
. In
this
essay, I will introduce some of the
reasons
followed by a probable solution for each one of them.
First,
one of the most common
reasons
is that teaching is a demanding job. Many
teachers
are suffering from stress and anxiety owing to the sense of responsibility and the hard task
that is
required.
In other words
, the
students
' improvement, the
administration
work
, the parents' satisfaction
as well as
, planning lessons and correcting tasks are not easy to handle. Most of the time,
teachers
usually
work
extra hours, at school and at home,
besides
being on their feet all day. Personally, I think assistance must be provided. The
administration
should be aware of the pressure and act
according to
it.
For example
, each teacher should have a teacher assistant that would help with some tasks
such
as; filling the
students
' reports, preparing some activities, and dealing with the
administration
work
.
Secondly
, Another main reason is today's generation's bad behaviour, more specifically, secondary school
students
, known as teenagers. Current
students
are less respectful than the previous ones, they tend to be violent and so sensitive. I believe video games and social media are to blame.
As a result
,
teachers
find difficulties coping with them. To deal with
this
, I reckon that parents should be involved and be present regularly to help the
teachers
educate the learners.
Also
, the
administration
should make strict rules in order to take control of them and help them get a good education.
Finally
, the long period of study is
also
one of the major
reasons
why fewer people want to become
teachers
as well as
the low salary that come after it. A survey has found that teaching is the least paid
work
among academic jobs.
For example
, in Algeria,
teachers
would only afford food and drinks, they would never dream about buying new clothes or booking a nice holiday since the salary is about $250 a month. So, knowing
this
fact graduates wouldn't bother to study all that period for
such
a salary. To tackle the problem, the government should put more value on
this
profession, regarding the importance of education and the hard
work
that it requires.
teachers
should be honoured and well paid. In conclusion, Teaching is a noble job, it is the basis of community. As a teacher, I am very proud and I urge more people to become
teachers
as the sensation of seeing your
students
' achievement is the best feeling you would ever feel in other occupations.
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