The graph on the rigth shows the amounts spent on clothes on the Internet in the USA and Japan between 1999 and 2003. Write a report for a university lecturere describing the information shown
The graph reveals the online expenditure on clothes in millions of
dollars
in five years (1999-2003), comparing Japan and the USA. It can be clearly seen that both lines show great similarities.
Japanese
spent 10 Replace the word
Japan
million
dollars
in 1999, presenting a slice increase in 2000 (12 million
dollars
), and in the follwoing
year showing its lowest expenditure with 7 Correct your spelling
following
million
dollars
. After 2001, there exists a rapide
climb Correct your spelling
rapid
of
money spent on apparel online (18 Change preposition
in
million
dollrs
in 2002), with having Correct your spelling
dollars
ist
peak in 2004 (20 Correct your spelling
its
million
dollars
).
Starting from a lower point with
5 Change preposition
of
million
dollars
, US citizen
spent less money at the beginning Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
in
1999; Change preposition
of
nevertheless
experiencing
a similar climb in the next year (10 Wrong verb form
experienced
million
dollar
). Not only is the curve dropping in 2001, but Change to a plural noun
dollars
also
it declines in the same way as the Japanese spending of money.
Despise the starting point, there is no obvious outstanding difference between both countries and their rising online costs on
clothes.Change preposition
of
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