The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In 2007, the

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access was not relatively sufficient. It was quite hard to access the hospital

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as the

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parking

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quite hectic. Buses and cars were parked at the side of the

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at the same place. The parking lot seems small which can lead to parking congestion. People might be stuck for hours finding a parking spot if the hospital was busy. A lot of

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might

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happen since the

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does not

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the

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of cars and buses. Unlike in 2010, they have added

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. It is great to reduce

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congestions

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and it makes people follow more

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rules.

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are generally used for maximizing the

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flow, so people don’t get stuck at a place.

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generally safer for pedestrians walking from the City

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.

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reduce fuel

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and emissions since vehicles must go slower to complete a circle. They

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separate the parking spots for staff,

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and buses. It helps prevent accidents and promote safety by reducing the number of vehicles on the

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and reducing the likelihood of collisions.