The line graph compares the average number of British people using three different forms of transport over period of 60 year
The line graph compares the average
number
of British people using three different forms of transport over period
of 60 year
Add an article
a period
It is clear that
the number
of car users
have
increased dramatically over 60 Change the verb form
has
year
, Change to a plural noun
years
while
the number
of bus
users
have
decreased steadily and the Change the verb form
has
number
of train users
have
slightly Change the verb form
has
rise
In 1970, the Wrong verb form
risen
number
of travelers
using cars and trains was about 2,5 Change the spelling
travellers
million
and 5 million
and have
increased steadily . At the same time , the Correct subject-verb agreement
has
number
of bus
users
is just around 4 million
. In 2015, the number
of train users
and bus
users
have been equaling around 3,6 million
In 2030, It is predicted that the number
of car users
and train users
will increase to 9 million
and 5 million
. At the same time, the number
of bus
users
to travel is predicted to fall to 3 million
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