Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

Excessive number of people in large cities
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a lot of serious issues. In
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I will attempt to provide several reasons and the approach to other
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difficulties in traffic flow.
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not doubt that
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difficulties for public transport.
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high risk of accidents.
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inconvenient for citizens to get to their jobs,
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have to spend more
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to their
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on
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week-day and
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clearly seen that the same distance takes twice less, interims of
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to the fact that a less transport in the city, and the main streets and roads are not loaded with personal cars. In
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strategies to decrease
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of vehicles in municipalities.
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is crucial to proceed to elaborate new road infrastructure and to being allocating funds for
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people travel to work by
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, as they have
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designed
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. In conclusion, they are efficient ways to solve the situation, it is all about how main state actors hold their responsibilities.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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