There are different factors that will influent the percentage of the population living in the city, this report will illustrate the different characteristics of this phenomenon including the original rate, the growth trend, and the prediction rate in different four countries, and make comparisons and a conclusion.

There are different factors that will influent the percentage of the
population
living in the city,
this
report will illustrate the different characteristics of
this
phenomenon including the original
rate
, the growth trend, and the prediction
rate
in different four
countries
, and make comparisons and a conclusion. The original
rate
begins in 1970, with more than 30% of people living in the city in the
Philippines
, and the country's urban
population
is the higher
rate
in these four
countries
.
Then
, Malaysia’s
rate
is about 30%, it is second
class
and close to first
class
.
Last
, the Thailand
rate
is about 18%, the third
class
, and Indonesia is about 14%, the
last
class
. The
graph
intuitional shows the growth trend. It is easy to figure that Malaysia’s urban
population
is growing quickly, in the 1990s, the data became the first
class
and growth continually. The
Philippines
continually decreased from the 1990s to 2010s, and the
graph
predicts the
Philippines
will be the third
class
in the
future
. Indonesia is creasing too, it was beyond the
Philippines
in the 2010s, and the
graph
predicts it will become second-
class
in the
future
. Thailand is creasing slowly; the
graph
predicts it will become the
last
class
in the
future
. Compare with different data, the reason causes
this
phenomenon could be found. Different from other
countries
, Malaysia is a land country, and the development of industry could expand the city, it will crease the urban
population
. Indonesia, the
Philippines
, and Thailand are all island states, so it is hard to develop industries in them, they are more focused on protecting the environment to attract tourists. At
last
, the
graph
shows the changes in the percentage of the urban
population
in four
countries
, and give some trend to predict the
future
, and
this
characteristic will help people to estimate the strategy of development for a country.
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