The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the origin of tourists who visit Australia for their holiday.
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the table data show us the estimated length of stay , the most used accommodation and the main activity of those said holidaymakers.
According to
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the given data, there are 4 distinct groups of tourists
according to
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their origin continent. The pie chart is divided into 4 sections for each tourist's origin continent which is Asia, Europe, the US, and others. Around a little bit over one-third of total visitors came from Asia,
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makes them the biggest portion of visitors who come to Australia. Coming in second with a slightly lower percentage is the European visitor, Who
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make up another one-third of the total tourist's number. and the
last
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one-third is the combination of American tourists and those from other regions, with Americans taking up a bigger half of the 2 combined numbers.
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the data in the table given to us,it can be seen that the average length of stay is around half a month with Asian travellers spending the least time. And for the Accommodation, each group has their own preference.
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, the main attraction for each group is sightseeing for Asian and American groups and others for the rest.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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