Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There are people stating that the number of
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facilities should be increased in order to improve public health,
while
others believe in more affection from alternative measures. I partially agree with
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of
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centers
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, though, I still think that there are still other nuances to deal with. Constructing more buildings for people’s
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was always a great idea and will remain to be one. With more
sport
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centers
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, people will have
consequently
more
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to go
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the nearest one except for
further
ones.
Also
, given proper advertisement, more citizens would want to get involved after learning about
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health
benefits. And
lastly
,
membership’s
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availability would skyrocket
due to
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the increased
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amount of
such
places, which would
then
lead to
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and health communities
to form
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.
While
there is no argument against
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facilities, there are still problems to solve.
Firstly
, many adults are not able to spare
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due to
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demanding jobs.
Also
, many parents have to take care of their children. And other house pos.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • sports facilities
  • physical activity
  • exercise
  • chronic diseases
  • heart disease
  • obesity
  • inclusivity
  • participation
  • safe environment
  • social interaction
  • community engagement
  • comprehensive approach
  • health education programs
  • environmental factors
  • healthcare infrastructure
  • quality healthcare services
  • public health initiatives
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