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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage?

#experts #children #language #school #outweigh
There is a common
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belief
 that kids should
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 another
language
 which is different from
mother's
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their mother's
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language
 when they are
at
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in
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the
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secondary
school
.
However
,some professional educators argue that children could early
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foreign
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to foreign
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language
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languages
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 when they are in primary.In my opinion,
this
 trend may bring both positive and
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negative
. On the one hand,learning
different
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language
 when we
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are
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 young can bring us
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 of advantage.
To begin
 with,
study
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studying
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second
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a second
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language
 helps youths
be
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gain a better understanding of other
culture
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cultures
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.Students can learn
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the history
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,culture and even
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the costoms
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costoms
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customs
 of overseas clearly without
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studying
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 at
school
.To make clear,in the era of
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 in America,
the
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 teenagers who are at
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age
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from
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15 to 19 have to pick up
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the Cuba
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language
 so as to serve
for
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in
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 the war,most of them are have a test about another
country
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country's
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 history,
costums
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customs
costumes
 and
traditional
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traditions
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.The results of the test are about 90 percent of young soldiers all get
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 score.
Besides
,learning another
language
 when we are young can help us easily speak it fluently and
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 another
language
 as
mother
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a mother
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language
.
For example
,my mom
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 my younger sister English when she was 5,
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as
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and as
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 a result
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for
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2 months later she
can
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 easily talk as a native speaker.
On the other hand
,learning a new
language
 has still some drawbacks.
Firstly
, primary
school
 teachers are generalists, and may not have the necessary
language
 skills themselves. Learners may not understand clearly their mother
tounge
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tongue
.
For instance
,in my local area amount of kids
are learn
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learned
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foreign
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a foreign
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language
 when they
was
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were
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 4.When they go to
school
,they can not know how to speak
VietNamese
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Vietnamese
 clearly.Another thing we have to face up with is the downside of letting
this
 type of ability
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 practised early in their life is mainly around the confusion caused by it.
For instance
,
the
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children who were allowed to practice foreign speaking will get confused when having conversations
in
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at
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their
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apply
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home or in their daily activities
due to
 the complex thinking caused by the multi-linguistic brain. They tend to have difficulties expressing some words. In conclusion,learning
foreign
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a foreign
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language
 when we are young may bring both
advangtages
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advantages
 and disadvantages.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive abilities
  • pronunciation
  • self-conscious
  • cultural awareness
  • global society
  • proficiency levels
  • competitive job market
  • foundational skills
  • qualified teachers
  • recreational activities
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