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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is thought that if individuals are studying in their own
country
, they should be obligated to work in their
country
. From my standpoint, it is correct because their
country
 spent
on
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money or time to improve their citizens. On the one hand,
people
 are independent that’s why they will go anywhere where they want,
in addition
, humans’ rights defend
to
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this
 view. Because the person does not choose to live
in
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there, he may prefer to move somewhere.
Furthermore
,
people
 studying is not
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governments'
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 good,
although
, the government has to provide them with a suitable environment to work and live in.
Therefore
, it can be clearly said that the link between the state and the citizen is not a reciprocal link.
On the other hand
, the person gaining
profession
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 dept to own
country
 because his society pays tax to the government for improving him. As
the
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people
 educated emigrate to other countries, countries' sources are wasted.
Therefore
, they have to live in their own
country
, especially, in
such
 crucial occupations as scientist, doctor and engineer.
However
, sometimes it may be necessary for
people
 to go abroad because their profession is not suitable for working in their own
country
. We think that unless government ensure a suitable environment for them to work in, they will desire to go to other countries, but it is not true because they still dept to their own
country
.
To conclude
, the
people
 have to stay in their own
country
otherwise
 their
country
 lose a lot of money and time.
As a result
 of
this
, the
country
 never develops.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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