Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is thought that if individuals are studying in their own
country
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, they should be obligated to work in their
country
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. From my standpoint, it is correct because their
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spent
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money or time to improve their citizens. On the one hand,
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are independent that’s why they will go anywhere where they want,
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, humans’ rights defend
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this
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view. Because the person does not choose to live
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there, he may prefer to move somewhere.
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,
people
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studying is not
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the governments'
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governments'
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good,
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, the government has to provide them with a suitable environment to work and live in.
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, it can be clearly said that the link between the state and the citizen is not a reciprocal link.
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, the person gaining
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dept to own
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because his society pays tax to the government for improving him. As
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people
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educated emigrate to other countries, countries' sources are wasted.
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, they have to live in their own
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, especially, in
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crucial occupations as scientist, doctor and engineer.
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, sometimes it may be necessary for
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to go abroad because their profession is not suitable for working in their own
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. We think that unless government ensure a suitable environment for them to work in, they will desire to go to other countries, but it is not true because they still dept to their own
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.
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, the
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have to stay in their own
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otherwise
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their
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lose a lot of money and time.
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of
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, the
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never develops.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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