Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarket have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals think that manufacturers and

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have the responsibility to minimize the

amount

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of packaging of

products

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. Others argue that

customers

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should avoid purchasing

products

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with a lot of

packging

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packaging

. In my opinion, the manufacturers and

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supermarket

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have the full responsibility to decrease the

amount

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of packaging of

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. On the one hand, some think the

customers

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the main responsible to reduce the

amount

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of packaging. They believe if

customers

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do not buy the

goods

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with a lot of packages, which means

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step can discourage manufacturing

companies

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and

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supermarket

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to put a significant

amount

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of packaging with their

productes

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products

in order to meet the desire of their expect

customers

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.

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, I would like to agree with those people who believe the main responsible for packaging are production

companies

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and

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supermarket

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.

To begin

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wit

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with

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, the first stage of

produce

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producing

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any

goods

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such

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as

,

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food, electronic

deveices

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devices

,

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and bottle

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bottle

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bottled

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water

start

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starts

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in factories, which

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this

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apply

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indicate

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indicates

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manufacturing

companies

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can reduce

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the aomunt

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aomunt

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amount

of packaging in their

products

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.

Therefore

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, manufacturing

companies

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is

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are

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the first responsible for too much packaging.

Furthermore

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, the second stage of

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the destribution

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destribution

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distribution

of

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is occurred

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occurs

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in the

supermakers

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supermarkets

supermarket

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Consequently

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, if the supermarkets

refuse

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receive the

products

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with a

conderiable

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considerable

amount

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of packaging from manufacturing

companies

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,

this

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step can demotivate the manufacturing

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for too much

pakaging

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packaging

.

To sum up

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, I totally believe that manufacturers and

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supermarket

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is

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the afford full responsibility for

significant

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a significant

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amount

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of packaging

,

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apply

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because the stage of

produce

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production

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and

destribution

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distribution

of

goods

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happened in production

companies

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and supermarkets.