In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by International fast food. Many people think that it is good to eat traditional foods while other believe that fast food is a good choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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These days, the consumption of fast

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has increased and

replaced

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by home-cooked

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. But what is the most effective method for dealing with the raised concerns about its negative impact

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Some people believe that

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trend will affect families and societies in many aspects. I completely agree, and in

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, The consumption of junk foods often leads to a decline in

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health as its typically high in calories ,unhealthy, and contributes to many diseases.

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, obesity, cardiovascular, and so. If people continue to eat

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unhealthy

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they would be afflicted with

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dreadful diseases. Another reason why I agree that

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a wide-ranging impact on our communities. Take teenagers as an example. Teenagers these days are less productive than in the past by 30% as mentioned in one of the experiments done by Oxford University, and the major reason for

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is the shift towards fast foods leading to the erosion of these healthier habits, negatively impacting the

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productivity and cognitive thinking.I strongly believe that

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is a serious way of wasting money. What is more, it frequently leads to overspending. In conclusion, it is a common misconception that eating international

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saves people time and effort when preparing home-cooked meals. I believe that overconsumption will have several adverse effects

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our communities,

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as unhealthy habits, dangerous illness, and waste of money. Personally, I believe we should give

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idea some thought before making a decision.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 5.5

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nutritional value
culinary heritage
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global cuisine
obesity epidemic
dietary habits
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