In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by International fast food. Many people think that it is good to eat traditional foods while other believe that fast food is a good choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days, the consumption of fast

food

has increased and

replaced

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by home-cooked

food

. But what is the most effective method for dealing with the raised concerns about its negative impact

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Some people believe that

this

trend will affect families and societies in many aspects. I completely agree, and in

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,essay I will support my opinion with examples.

Firstly

, The consumption of junk foods often leads to a decline in

overall

health as its typically high in calories ,unhealthy, and contributes to many diseases.

For example

, obesity, cardiovascular, and so. If people continue to eat

this

unhealthy

food

then

they would be afflicted with

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dreadful diseases. Another reason why I agree that

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a wide-ranging impact on our communities. Take teenagers as an example. Teenagers these days are less productive than in the past by 30% as mentioned in one of the experiments done by Oxford University, and the major reason for

this

is the shift towards fast foods leading to the erosion of these healthier habits, negatively impacting the

individuals

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productivity and cognitive thinking.I strongly believe that

this

is a serious way of wasting money. What is more, it frequently leads to overspending. In conclusion, it is a common misconception that eating international

food

saves people time and effort when preparing home-cooked meals. I believe that overconsumption will have several adverse effects

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our communities,

such

as unhealthy habits, dangerous illness, and waste of money. Personally, I believe we should give

this

idea some thought before making a decision.