In some countries, owing a home rather than renting is very important. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Some countries believe that
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a
home
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is an asset. In my opinion,
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agree with the notion because, when you own your
home
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you automatically do not have to be making a monthly payment for a shelter. You can
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save that fund or divert the money for that payment for other necessities of life,
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as a good education for yourself or a family. Moreso, houses can equally be a source of income when you rent
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out, in parts or in
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entirety, for others to live in. You can
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use it as
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collateral to acquire more assets eg
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capital, machinery, lands, other houses etc from banks.
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,
house
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prices can only appreciate and never
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.
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means that whenever you decide to sell the
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, you will only make gains on the capital used in buying your
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. That
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, you can pass down a
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as an inheritance and it will continue to be an abode to your generations. Acquiring a
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is a good
buisness
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business
idea as it can become easier to acquire other houses, once you have your first one,and put it up for rental.
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, a
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acquisition in some countries can give an immigrant automatic citizenship in that country. Generally, being a
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owner automatically gives you peace of mind and contributes to
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mental stability.
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is because you no longer bother about shelter,
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a necessity of life.
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ownership is a serious contributor to financial stability in most ways, and has always been a serious concern even in societies where renting seems cheaper than buying , even though
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financial recklessness can easily lead to loosing of a
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. There are so many adjustments one can
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in
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an acquired property, to
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ones
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lifestyle which is not obtainable in
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case of
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rented
accomodation
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accommodation
. There could be reasons why one may not want to own a
home
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, but generally speaking, property ownership has always been considered a great idea, and its acquisition can not be overrated.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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