In some countries, owing a home rather than renting is very important. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Some countries believe that
to own
a Change the verb form
owning
home
is an asset. In my opinion, i
agree with the notion because, when you own your Change the capitalization
I
home
you automatically do not have to be making a monthly payment for a shelter. You can rather
save that fund or divert the money for that payment for other necessities of life, Rephrase
apply
such
as a good education for yourself or a family. Moreso, houses can equally be a source of income when you rent it
out, in parts or in Correct pronoun usage
them
its
entirety, for others to live in. You can Correct pronoun usage
their
also
use it as a
collateral to acquire more assets eg Correct article usage
apply
buisness
capital, machinery, lands, other houses etc from banks. Correct your spelling
business
Also
, house
prices can only appreciate and never depreciates
. Correct subject-verb agreement
depreciate
This
means that whenever you decide to sell the house
, you will only make gains on the capital used in buying your house
. That not withstanding
, you can pass down a Correct your spelling
notwithstanding
house
as an inheritance and it will continue to be an abode to your generations. Acquiring a house
is a good buisness
idea as it can become easier to acquire other houses, once you have your first one,and put it up for rental. Correct your spelling
business
However
, a house
acquisition in some countries can give an immigrant automatic citizenship in that country. Generally, being a house
owner automatically gives you peace of mind and contributes to a
mental stability. Remove the article
apply
This
is because you no longer bother about shelter, being
a necessity of life. Wrong verb form
which is
House
ownership is a serious contributor to financial stability in most ways, and has always been a serious concern even in societies where renting seems cheaper than buying , even though ones
financial recklessness can easily lead to loosing of a Change noun form
one's
home
. There are so many adjustments one can do
Verb problem
make
in
an acquired property, to Change preposition
to
suite
Correct your spelling
suit
ones
lifestyle which is not obtainable in Change to a genitive case
one's
a
case of Correct article usage
the
a
rented Correct article usage
apply
accomodation
. There could be reasons why one may not want to own a Correct your spelling
accommodation
home
, but generally speaking, property ownership has always been considered a great idea, and its acquisition can not be overrated.Submitted by jacydavidokey on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
