Some believe that the Olympic games help bring people from different nations together, while others claim that holding the Olympics wastes money which could be used for important issues. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

Many today have made a controversial debate that the

Olympics

competition gives a chance for citizens around the world to come closer,

while

some think that it is a waste of budget on other significant spending.

Although

holding the

Olympics

might ask for more

money

than others, I believe that it benefits the connection between

countries

. Some argue that the

Olympics

activity is a means of

wasteful

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money

instead

of other essential things because it requires more

money

than others.

This

means that organizing the game has always asked for various types of

money

from

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stadium to a large number of

staffs

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to meet the needs of massive audiences,

while

other important issues might need less amount of

money

such

as health services for residents in their own

countries

.

For instance

, it is reported that not every nation can afford the huge budget

on

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taking

responsibilities

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for the

Olympics

even though they are desiring to do so.

Instead

,

just

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some certain developed nations

are having

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sufficient

money

on

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it. Despite

this

, I would argue that holding the Olympic activities brings people

come

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closer.

It is clear that

organizing the

Olympics

is one of the most effective ways to connect

countries

over

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the world.

This

is because the activity is an influential event with a well-known reputation, which so many

countries

would love to participate in.

As a result

,

this

is a precious opportunity to explore the world because everyone converges in a particular host nation. As

such

, the

Olympics

can be a bridge between nations to enter into economic

negotiation

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or even political issues. Taking everything into consideration, though being in charge of holding the

Olympics

might be wasteful when it comes to

money

, I believe that it is a great chance to meet people from many nations.