More and more people are working from home rather than at the workplaces. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

At present, most of the public prefers to attend office from their

home

instead

of the workplace.

According to

some individuals,

this

phenomenon acts as a beneficence both for the employees and their family members

while

others believe that

this

creates harm in the family. I partially agree with

this

statement because though the opportunity

for attending

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office from

home

mostly acts positively on working mothers, it sometimes acts as a drawback to the performance and health of the people. It is imperative that, at present both men and women equally contribute to the economy

therefore

, providing convenient working facilities and environments is essential in the corporate world. If employees are allowed to perform from

home

which has become a popular term as "work from

home

", that might help them to perform better and effectively. Most of the employees,

for example

, who are working mothers could easily balance their household chores, childbearing and working life if they are permitted to work from

home

.

Furthermore

, those who are working from

home

can easily do some overtime to earn extra money.

Hence

, because of these facilities, working from

home

could enhance the productivity and performance of people.

Although

working from

home

benefits

especially

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women, it somehow affects public health.

For example

, if people come out from

home

, and commute to the workplace, they can access the fresh air and walk

while

capturing public transport.

This

could help them to exercise for a short period of time and provide them with a change which is necessary to erase the daily monotony of life.

Moreover

, working from

home

requires silence and a calm environment to concentrate and focus which might not always be available in the

home

.

As a result

, it could breach the confidentiality of the organization.

For example

, if any child or any patient is present in the

home

this

maintenance would not be possible.

To conclude

, working from

home

is somehow beneficial to others

however

, it sometimes does harm to the privacy of the organization and productivity of the workers. But there is no doubt that it is a blessing for working mothers.