More and more people are working from home rather than at the workplaces. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

At present, most of the public prefers to attend office from their

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of the workplace.

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some individuals,

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phenomenon acts as a beneficence both for the employees and their family members

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others believe that

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creates harm in the family. I partially agree with

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statement because though the opportunity

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office from

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mostly acts positively on working mothers, it sometimes acts as a drawback to the performance and health of the people. It is imperative that, at present both men and women equally contribute to the economy

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, providing convenient working facilities and environments is essential in the corporate world. If employees are allowed to perform from

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which has become a popular term as "work from

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", that might help them to perform better and effectively. Most of the employees,

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, who are working mothers could easily balance their household chores, childbearing and working life if they are permitted to work from

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, those who are working from

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can easily do some overtime to earn extra money.

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, because of these facilities, working from

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could enhance the productivity and performance of people.

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working from

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benefits

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women, it somehow affects public health.

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, if people come out from

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, and commute to the workplace, they can access the fresh air and walk

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capturing public transport.

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could help them to exercise for a short period of time and provide them with a change which is necessary to erase the daily monotony of life.

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, working from

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requires silence and a calm environment to concentrate and focus which might not always be available in the

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.

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, it could breach the confidentiality of the organization.

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, if any child or any patient is present in the

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maintenance would not be possible.

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, working from

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is somehow beneficial to others

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, it sometimes does harm to the privacy of the organization and productivity of the workers. But there is no doubt that it is a blessing for working mothers.