The two pie charts illustrate percantage of some employment patterns by sex and occupation in Great Britain in 1992.

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percentage

of some employment patterns by sex and occupation in Great Britain in 1992.

Overall

, it can be seen that more

males

worked

by

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manual

jobs

.

Whereas

, non-manual

jobs

appealed

for

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females. In regard to manual

jobs

, more

males

than females

were

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worked 52 per

cent

and 31 per

cent

respectively.

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other manual

jobs

, the indicator between

male

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males

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and

female

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females

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can

seen

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to be equal,

aro9und

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around

27 per

cent

to 26 per

cent

. In any case, the demand for

the

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general labourers is low, than

other

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works

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workers

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.

On the other hand

,

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occupations were more popular among women at 69 per

cent

in contrast

to 48 per

cent

among

males

.

However

, more

males

were positioned managerial and professional

works

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than women, 36 per

cent

and 29 per

cent

respectively. The proportion of females in clerical or related works exceeded that of

male

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males

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, at 31 per

cent

and 6

percent

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.