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The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory

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The given flowchart shows the manufacture of coloured
plastic
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paper
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 clips in a small manufactory.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that there are seven stages of the
process
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 of colouring
plastic
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paper
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 clips production, starting from molten
plastic
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 to the packing and shipment
process
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.
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 with, the first step of
paper
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 clip making is to molten the
plastic
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.
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, the mould is provided with three different
colours
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 which are red, blue, and yellow. After that, these moulds mould should go through a
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 called
quality
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control
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 in a machine check to strengthen the mould. After the
quality
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control
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process
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, there are two results either the mould is rejected or accepted for the next
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. The
plastic
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 that passes the
quality
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control
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 is sorted by hand,
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then
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and then
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 divided into mixed
colours
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, single
colours
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, and unknown
colours
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 of
paper
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 clips. Another
quality
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control
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 is required in the next
process
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, which is to check the
colours
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 which are mixture or singles.
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, the
last
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 stage is packing and
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 delivery to the consumers.
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