The table below shows the percentages of moblie phone owners using various mobile phone features from 2006 to 2010.
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shows comparative data about using various cell phone features by its owners between 2006 and 2010.
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Overall
, it is obvious that the most popular function among the
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2006 and 2010 has been making calls.
As is presented in the table there was no capability for searching the Internet and recording videos by 2006, Change preposition
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whereas
next 4 years these features has
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, the huge changes were in the field of playing games, within a time span of four years percentage rate has grown for
24%. Change preposition
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functions
such
as taking photos, playing music and texting messages has
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risen
raised
for
almost 10%. As aforementioned, making calls is the most required operation and the one which nearly has no alterations in percentage rate.Change preposition
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