The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure illustrates the life cycle of
salmon
which is a kind of large fish step by step.
Overall
, we can see that
salmon
’s life cycle has three main stages, and starts with the upper
river
to the open sea. In the beginning,
salmon
eggs are put in the bottom of small stones among reeds in the upper
river
where the water is slowly moving.
This
phase has taken about 6 months. After that, baby
salmon
which are called fry, their length is 3 to 8 centimetres, are going to the lower part of the
river
where water has fast flowing, and they spent 4 years in that area.
Next,
after 4 years, the fries are becoming smolt, their length is 12 to 15 centimetres, go to the open sea, spend the rest of their 5 years in that and become adult
salmon
. The length of the adult
salmon
is between 70 to 76 centimetres. In the end, adult
salmon
go into the upper
river
for breeding and put their eggs on the small stones.
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