The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figure illustrates the life cycle of
salmon
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which is a kind of large fish step by step.
Overall
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, we can see that
salmon
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’s life cycle has three main stages, and starts with the upper
river
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to the open sea. In the beginning,
salmon
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eggs are put in the bottom of small stones among reeds in the upper
river
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where the water is slowly moving.
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phase has taken about 6 months. After that, baby
salmon
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which are called fry, their length is 3 to 8 centimetres, are going to the lower part of the
river
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where water has fast flowing, and they spent 4 years in that area.
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after 4 years, the fries are becoming smolt, their length is 12 to 15 centimetres, go to the open sea, spend the rest of their 5 years in that and become adult
salmon
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. The length of the adult
salmon
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is between 70 to 76 centimetres. In the end, adult
salmon
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go into the upper
river
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for breeding and put their eggs on the small stones.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, river with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • freshwater streams
  • small pebbles
  • reeds
  • alevin
  • yolk sac
  • nourishment
  • fry
  • grow stronger
  • grow larger
  • parr
  • defined markings
  • estuaries
  • smolt
  • adapt to saltwater
  • ocean
  • full size
  • sexual maturity
  • spawn
  • life cycle
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