The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present.
The supplied illustration of graph presents information about
quantity
of library Add an article
the quantity
books
read by male and female students at Starmouth School coomencing
from 2006 until Correct your spelling
commencing
present
time.
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the present
Overall
, it is obvious that last
year girls have been reading more books
comparitively
to boys.
It is conspicuous that in 2009 ladies had read Correct your spelling
comparatively
for
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books
less than the opposite gender. Moreover
, by 2010 boys had read 80 books
, while
girls
progress composed only 40 Change noun form
girls'
girl's
books
. It is worth noticing that over the period of one year
both genders began to read the same amount of publications, Add a comma
,year
however
, by 2012 girls read 140 books
, while
men's progress dropped by 80 books
. Getting back to the details, it is clear that
within a time span of 3 year
female side of Fix the agreement mistake
years
school
move upward in reading library novels and reached the amount of 140 manuals.Correct article usage
the school
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