Topic: More and more people think there is no need for printed paper newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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population of the masses doubt the need to print
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. Only a few
number of
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people
still see the need for printed
paper
newspapers
. In my opinion,
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agree with the larger community of
people
who see no reason for printing a
newspaper
. Analysis of cheaper use of
the
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cyber space
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cyberspace
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for
information
and the ease to recall any
information
needed
in
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the
internet
will evidence the reasons why printed
paper
newspapers
is
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gradually
loosing
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its
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importance in the dissemination of
information
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society.
Firstly
, the
cyber space
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is consistently providing even much more amount of
information
to
people
, through their phones and other electronic gadgets at a cheaper rate and with little or no cost and stress of production
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encountered during
paper
newspaper
production.
For instance
,
people
use the same phone meant for communication to access any
information
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from
the
internet
, just with a click of a button.
This
is
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proof that printing
newspapers
now is a complete waste of ink, papers and other resources used during
this
production.
Hence
the doubt in
peoples
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people's
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mind
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minds
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, as to the need to print
paper
newspers
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newspapers
.
Secondly
, it is easier to recall any
information
one needs via the
internet
, than flipping through the pages of
newspapers
.
For example
, to search for
information
from a
newspaper
, one needs so many
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nights
and days to go through
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of
newspapers
, probably hipped in a room, over the years, constituting
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and taking up needed space.
whereas
, you could click on your gadget and every
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piece of information
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you need will pop up in seconds without stress.
this
no doubt made the wider population of
people
start seeing printed
paper
newspaers
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newspapers
as pointless.
Therefore
, the reason to stop seeing
paper
newspapers
as the best source of
information
. In conclusion,
i
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agree with the rising number of the population who do not see the need
in
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paper
newspaper
printing. These increasing masses have doubts as to the need to print
paper
newspapers
when they could still get even more
information
from the
internet
and at no cost. I am thereby predicting the total extinction of
paper
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in the nearest future.
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