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Nationalism and internationalism are two major career trends for highly skilled experts once they conclude their education. Regarding this controversial issue, some argue that they ought to remain and start an occupation where trained while others, like me, believe that they should have the freedom to select their profession anywhere they desire. I wholeheartedly agree with the second group and support the liberty to choose their workplace.
The invention of television has had a far-reaching impact on every member of society, including children. While some argue that watching TV benefits children's development, others worry about its negative impact. Even though a good influence of TV on children surely exists, I firmly believe that the demerits of minors watching TV without any restrictions should be considered, and a prudent approach is required for parents when letting children watch TV.
In recent years, It has been widely believed that information should be shared publicly, while others have thought that it is such major information to be kept private. From my perspective, I agree with the latter.
In this fast-paced era, the majority of people prefer communicating by text messages rather than talking and meeting in person. I believe this is due to a heavier daily schedule and the limited free time of individuals. Nevertheless, professional settings require face-to-face interactions.
