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You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the company which supplied the equipment. In your letter Describe the problem with the equipment explain what impact this has one your work say what you want the shop to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about a defective device that you sold me
last
 week. I purchased a wifi bundle from your company and it included the modem for the router, but the router is not working properly
as a result
 my work is suffering because I work via the internet. The wifi continues to drop for no reason. I
then
 have to manually restart the whole system by removing the plug from the socket and
then
 plugging it back in.
However
,
this
 only resolves the issue for ten or twenty minutes as my computer's wifi drops again.
This
 has been happening since I bought the device and it is affecting my duties as a manager.
Due to
 the recent pandemic, managers,
such
 as myself, have to have a meeting with their subordinates every day to ensure they complete their daily tasks so that our company can run smoothly.
However
,
due to
 my unreliable internet connection, I am unable to conduct these meetings and it is having a negative impact on my job performance. I urge you to send me a replacement part as soon as possible so that I am able to complete my obligations at work without any
further
 issues. Yours faithfully, Ibrahim Mohammad Zaman
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