You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the company which supplied the equipment. In your letter Describe the problem with the equipment explain what impact this has one your work say what you want the shop to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about a defective device that you sold me

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week. I purchased a wifi bundle from your company and it included the modem for the router, but the router is not working properly

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my work is suffering because I work via the internet. The wifi continues to drop for no reason. I

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have to manually restart the whole system by removing the plug from the socket and

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plugging it back in.

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this

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only resolves the issue for ten or twenty minutes as my computer's wifi drops again.

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has been happening since I bought the device and it is affecting my duties as a manager.

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the recent pandemic, managers,

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as myself, have to have a meeting with their subordinates every day to ensure they complete their daily tasks so that our company can run smoothly.

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due to

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my unreliable internet connection, I am unable to conduct these meetings and it is having a negative impact on my job performance. I urge you to send me a replacement part as soon as possible so that I am able to complete my obligations at work without any

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issues. Yours faithfully, Ibrahim Mohammad Zaman

Submitted by ibrahim_zaman on Tue Jul 11 2023

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

211 words

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You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the company which supplied the equipment. In your letter Describe the problem with the equipment explain what impact this has one your work say what you want the shop to do

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