You are a student at a language school in New Zealand studying Business English. Part of the course is a summer work placement program. Unfortunately, you have just learnt from the school that this programme has now been cancelled. Write a letter to the School Principal. In your letter: state your reason for writing describe the problem and your concerns explain what you would like the Principal to do
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Dear
sir
, I am a student of your Capitalize word
Sir
studying
business Verb problem
apply
school
and I am writing this
letter to draw your attention to the cancellation of the summer
work
placement program
. To commence with, Firstly
, I choose your school
for study to learn a different kind of opportunity like work
in the company.Additionally
, This
only happened with attending this
work
program
but yesterday I heard that this
summer
program
was cancelled. Your school
fees were extremely high comparatively Change preposition
to another
another department
.Fix the agreement mistake
other departments
However
, I want to afford this
because I know you are a student at a language school
in New Zealand studying Business English. Part of the course is a summer
work
placement program
. Unfortunately, you have just learnt from the school
that this
programme has now been cancelled. Write a letter to the School
Principal. In your letter: state your reason for writing describe the problem and your concerns explain what you would like the Principal to do at this
program
is beneficial for me. Furthermore
, this
program
was not held in the summer
I want my 50% of the amount of fees back as well as
I want to go to another college because I am very disappointed by this
. I hope you understand my whole problem and give a quick response regarding this
to me. Yours faithfully, Steve Hopkins.Submitted by kaverigoti2209 on
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coherence cohesion
Organize the letter into clear paragraphs with a proper opening, body, and closing.
task response
Address the cancellation of the work placement program and your concerns in a more structured manner. Clearly state your request and expectations from the principal.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.